Feedback from Rough Cuts
Like Could Be Improved
Teacher Feedback
Front
Cover- The stories and layout. Photo-use one that doesn’t need cuttingContents- Layout. Make all fonts uniform
Double Page Spread- Layout. Odd photo
Peer Feedback
Peer One
Front
Cover- Layout.
Title. Different picture. Change ‘World Exclusive’-
use a different colour or font. Don’t like the black writing against hair
Contents
Page- Images. Layout. Too much space. Too
much serif font. Maybe another pictureDouble Page Spread- Layout. Image. Edit picture. Too much red-question to black. Quote red
Peer Two
Front
Cover- Like layout, fonts and sizes. Change background colour and picture
Contents
Page- Like pictures. Change fonts-make more interesting. Use bigger titles. Too slanted
photo of Joe. Double Page Spread- Like picture, effect on the picture and layout. Add caption to picture, Write info on who wrote article and about C.D
Peer Three
Front
Cover-Like layout, union jack circle and barcode.
Change photo and font on Katie.
Contents
Page- Like all of it. Change logo.Double Page Spread- Like picture. Change shorten questions and edit picture.
Peer Four
Front Cover- Like the model-fits magazine genre. Change the image, more features.
Contents Page- Like colour scheme. More pictures
Double Page Spread- Like picture. Add another photo, add captions.
How i will improve my magazine using these comments
From the comments i have recieved i have noticed that the majority of people like the layout of each of the pages in my magazine, mainly the cover and double page spread, so i think that i will try and keep that mostly the same. For the front cover most people have said to use a different picture, i agree with this statement and will therefore be taking a different image that has more natural light and doesn't need cutting. For my contents page people commented on the images, the space and the un-tidiness of the text. I again agree with each of these and will aim to change one of the images to add variety, add more features and text to fill in the space and re-arrange the text. The comments for my double page spread were mostly positive apart from people suggesting captions for the image and for the image to be edited, so i will therefore be editing the image more to appeal to my target audience also.
From the comments i have recieved i have noticed that the majority of people like the layout of each of the pages in my magazine, mainly the cover and double page spread, so i think that i will try and keep that mostly the same. For the front cover most people have said to use a different picture, i agree with this statement and will therefore be taking a different image that has more natural light and doesn't need cutting. For my contents page people commented on the images, the space and the un-tidiness of the text. I again agree with each of these and will aim to change one of the images to add variety, add more features and text to fill in the space and re-arrange the text. The comments for my double page spread were mostly positive apart from people suggesting captions for the image and for the image to be edited, so i will therefore be editing the image more to appeal to my target audience also.
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